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Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth. Desire beyond reason…or rationale.

It’s not easy to write a
scene that captures your reader’s imagination and attention. To hold
them in a grip so tight…they go up in flames.

Today, I want you to share your
Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader…up in flames.
doesn’t have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our
blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.

start it off, here’s a snippet from my upcoming

She wet her lips and moved a step nearer. “We’d have to
work closely together. You cool with that?”
Unveiled hunger smoldered in his eyes. She took a chance.
Patience did something so far out of character that she even surprised herself.
Lifting to her tiptoes, she turned her face up to his.
Heat sizzled from his arms and soaked into her body. His hot
look of surprise was followed by an even hotter response. The moment he lowered
his head and took her lips, broiler fans set on high blew over her. 
With a subtle shift of his legs and wicked ass, he burrowed
her tighter against him. Apparently, it wasn’t close enough, because his hand
slid over her hip and pulled her closer into him. His palm continued to move
lower, shaping a butt cheek through the thin t-shirt she wore. 
Dampness saturated her bikini panties—she shivered,
realizing how unconcealed that sign of arousal was. 
Rhycious chuckled in a low tone, rubbing his hardened pelvis
against her. “As far as working together, I’d say we’re off to a great
start.” He let her feel his cock in its engorged splendor, and moved with
sensuous play against her mound. 
His teeth nibbled and soft lips worked their magic down the
side of her neck. She dropped her head back to give him further entrée.
“We’ll be totally teamed up. I’m game if you are.”
“Should we practice our joint effort, polytima, and see how good we can be
How much hotter could they possibly get? Much as she hated
flames, her body burned hot enough to internally combust.
people! I showed you mine – now it’s your turn to show me yours. Don’t forget to leave
your book title so interested parties can rush  out and buy a copy  🙂
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