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Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth. Desire beyond reason…or rationale.
It’s not easy to write a
scene that captures your reader’s imagination and attention. To hold
them in a grip so tight…they go up in flames.
Today, I want you to share your
Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader…up in flames.
Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader…up in flames.
It
doesn’t have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our
blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.
doesn’t have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our
blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.
To
start it off, here’s a snippet from my upcoming
release.
start it off, here’s a snippet from my upcoming
release.
She wet her lips and moved a step nearer. “We’d have to
work closely together. You cool with that?”
work closely together. You cool with that?”
Unveiled hunger smoldered in his eyes. She took a chance.
Patience did something so far out of character that she even surprised herself.
Lifting to her tiptoes, she turned her face up to his.
Patience did something so far out of character that she even surprised herself.
Lifting to her tiptoes, she turned her face up to his.
Heat sizzled from his arms and soaked into her body. His hot
look of surprise was followed by an even hotter response. The moment he lowered
his head and took her lips, broiler fans set on high blew over her.
look of surprise was followed by an even hotter response. The moment he lowered
his head and took her lips, broiler fans set on high blew over her.
With a subtle shift of his legs and wicked ass, he burrowed
her tighter against him. Apparently, it wasn’t close enough, because his hand
slid over her hip and pulled her closer into him. His palm continued to move
lower, shaping a butt cheek through the thin t-shirt she wore.
her tighter against him. Apparently, it wasn’t close enough, because his hand
slid over her hip and pulled her closer into him. His palm continued to move
lower, shaping a butt cheek through the thin t-shirt she wore.
Dampness saturated her bikini panties—she shivered,
realizing how unconcealed that sign of arousal was.
realizing how unconcealed that sign of arousal was.
Rhycious chuckled in a low tone, rubbing his hardened pelvis
against her. “As far as working together, I’d say we’re off to a great
start.” He let her feel his cock in its engorged splendor, and moved with
sensuous play against her mound.
against her. “As far as working together, I’d say we’re off to a great
start.” He let her feel his cock in its engorged splendor, and moved with
sensuous play against her mound.
His teeth nibbled and soft lips worked their magic down the
side of her neck. She dropped her head back to give him further entrée.
“We’ll be totally teamed up. I’m game if you are.”
side of her neck. She dropped her head back to give him further entrée.
“We’ll be totally teamed up. I’m game if you are.”
“Should we practice our joint effort, polytima, and see how good we can be
together?”
together?”
How much hotter could they possibly get? Much as she hated
flames, her body burned hot enough to internally combust.
flames, her body burned hot enough to internally combust.
Okay
people! I showed you mine – now it’s your turn to show me yours. Don’t forget to leave
your book title so interested parties can rush out and buy a copy 🙂
people! I showed you mine – now it’s your turn to show me yours. Don’t forget to leave
your book title so interested parties can rush out and buy a copy 🙂
WhoooHooo, it's my favorite day of the week. Friday Flames. Your Flame was SMOKING, Sheri!
I don't have anything to post this week, but I will be checking in throughout the day to read others Flames.
I can always count on YOU, Brendan. Oh, and here's a shameless plug for you:
LOVE'S PROPHECY. Available at Amazon
A wildly wicked and adventurous read about Warrior Vampires in a world originally created by Brenda M. Dyer.
LOL, Mike. Thanks for the plug–appreciate it!
Great job, my friend. This is from my 2nd, and possibly fave ms, called Rope the Moon. Cupping her bare breasts and as his calloused fingertips caressed her nipples into tight little buds, Jacy whimpered and arched off the bed. Her fingers curled around his neck. How could he make her want him like this? She felt weightless, as if he could free her to fly. Pressing against him, wordlessly, she begged for more. When he took one tight nipple into his mouth and gently bit down on it she thought she'd rocket straight into space. She heard the sounds… Read more »
In true D'Ann writing style, I just love this line:
Nothing could have stopped her from taking what he had to offer, even a herd of stampeding cattle.
Wow. ROPE THE MOON – love it. Publish it!!
When do I get to read this one, D'Ann? Yum!!!!
Sheri, how can I resist? I'll share this little tidbit from my romantic caper Lying Eyes. My hero and heroine have been tied up by a couple of thugs. She watched him, wanted to touch him. Being tied left her at such a disadvantage. And yet, seeing Mickey in the same condition gave her this crazy sort of rush. This was exactly the sort of trap she was trying to avoid in life. There was something unknown, dangerous, thrilling about this encounter. She tried to remind herself her life could very well be at stake, but somehow, Mickey’s presence gave… Read more »
Amy – I am SO glad you decided to play today! Holy smokes! I love your writing. It's flirty and fun in a serious situation. Kudos!
Lying Eyes – adding to my TBR…
Smoking, Sheri & D'Ann! Here's a tidbit from my latest release, BEFORE THE MORNING (Corpus Brides: Book 2), a romantic suspense/espionage thriller about a spy who leaves the clandestine life all in the name of love, for the man she's always loved. Here's a scene of their reunion: He steeled his arms around her waist and lifted her feet off the ground. She giggled against his mouth; he smiled, before claiming her lips again. He couldn't get enough of kissing her, of her body pressed to his, and he prayed she would never let him go. Pleasure, as searing as… Read more »
Zee – This is SOOO GOOOD! It seems there are some lines that jump out at me and this is yours:
Bloody hell, she tasted so good, her skin slightly sweet, with a hint of scent that reminded him of maple sugar.
It gave me a sensory feedback I truly relished. Thanks for stopping by and playing!
Lol, Sheri! Glad this little tidbit worked! xoxo
Oh GOD! I love FF! It's like moist cake with inches of thick icing! Here is mine from my short little story in the Melting Hearts Anthology with Ruby Lioness Press titled The Driver's Seat But then he was on her, pinning her against the glass door with his massive body. The entry bell jangled with the force. She couldn't catch her breath. His hands roamed her sides. She couldn't move and didn't want to. The heat of him lit her on fire, and every place their bodies met ignited a flame. He buried his nose in her hair and… Read more »
Casea – Congratulations on your latest publication! I'm so happy we're in the same pub house together .
Best wishes on The Driver's Seat. Your contribution to the RLP anthology is outstanding!!
And since this one's FREE this weekend only, I thought I'd share a snippet with you. 🙂 For the release of Book 2, my publisher's marked down Book 1 in the Corpus Brides series, WALKING THE EDGE. An amnesiac woman is on a quest, between London & Marseille, to find her repressed memories. What she finds though, is danger, deceit, secrets, and a man who could've played an important part in her life before… She parted her lips when he drew closer. Tension sizzled between them, and she recalled that moment on the streets when he had stood so close… Read more »
Thanks, Zee! I just downloaded my FREE copy. Off to share this with others now 🙂
Can't wait to hear your thoughts in this story, Sheri! Thanks for helping me spread the word 🙂 XOXO
This is from my sexy romantic suspense DECEIVE HER WITH DESIRE: The damp heat of Austin’s silky tongue was such a wonderful contrast to the stubble of his beard grazing her breasts. She dug her fingers into his hair, pulling him impossibly closer. All she wanted was his fingers to bring her to the climax her body had refused to surrender for months. The way his mouth and hands were teasing her nipples was driving her crazy. Men in her past had been more a curiosity and had never failed to disappointment. But this man, the one with the talented… Read more »
Flaming torches of desire! Nina, your opening line is a HIT. Loved it. I hope you'll be back next week. 🙂
Hot, hot, hot! I'm playing today… this is a snippet from my June 4 release 'What a Texas Girl Wants': Grinning, he slowly pulled his arms from the cotton as Kathleen, unable to look away as inch after inch of suntanned chest was revealed to her, tried desperately to calm her racing pulse. For a photographer who spent a lot of time in dark rooms he was certainly tanned. And buff. When his eyes fastened hungrily on her breasts she forgot to breathe altogether. Kathleen scrambled from her position against the walnut headboard, grabbing Jackson's ruined shirt from his thick… Read more »
Kristina, your teaser did its job. They have a past; what is it? It looks like they'll have a future; how did it happen?
I can't wait to find out. Thanks for coming by with your steamy hot scene!
I'll jump in a play here – from my WIP – Capri's Fate. The "I" in the story is Capri talking and who she is talking to is a male voice the followed her home from the sex toys convention. I – casually – waved my arm about. "Can I touch you? See you?""You would not understand our form. But I can touch you."A wave of heat slid up my leg."Oooh!" When my breath returned, I asked the most logical question I could think of. "Why are you here?""Earlier tonight you said, 'Let's see what the fates have in store'.… Read more »
Oooh!! Nice Daryl. Hehe, I'll go open your crit file and have a more in-depth peek at this one! Excellent flaming scene.
Love it, Sheri. This is an excerpt from FUR BALL FEVER. He captured her lips with his mouth. His kiss was slow and tantalizing, an erotic invitation to sensual delights. His tongue conducted a leisurely exploration of her mouth, twined, tasted. But he didn’t touch any part of her body. Caught up in the whirlwind, she could do little else but curl her toes. When he freed her lips, her breath was coming hard and fast. More turned on than she could ever remember, she took another risk. Still gasping for air, she explained, “Most bondage scenarios revolve around a… Read more »
Holy Hotness! I can see why you were given such a GREAT REVIEW on Fur Ball Fever!! Congratulations on that, btw.
Thank you very much for sharing your scene. Whew! *takes a drink of iced tea*
OMG! There are so many hot snippets here today! I'm melting over here! Nicely done everyone! You rock!!
*passes Jenn the fan* You ain't kidding – and there's more below! lol (doesn't that just sound naughty?)
Whew…another awesome week of hotness! Someone pass me the ice water and fan!
Awww one day I'll have something to add here! But I do love reading all your excerpts. Truly great stuff, ladies!
Thank you for not clicking away, but leaving everyone a message to let them know how much you enjoy their writing. It means so much to the authors who slave over their hard won words.
See you here again real soon, Melissa!
This is a snippet from Hot For The Teacher by me and my fellow co-author Bella Rosso,that is contracted and soon to be published. He closed his eyes as her hand went to his chest. He looked like he was losing it and then, finally, he opened his eyes and looked at her. “Say it, Dyani. Say that you want me. Tell me to take you, right here, right now.” His words pushed her out of her trance and she found she wanted to tell him that, wanted to at least experience him once before he tired of her. Tired… Read more »
Nikki – congratulations on your contract! That's so exciting. I hope you'll post more soon, and have a link for everyone to buy . Thanks for stopping by to play!
Okay, too HOT in here! LOl You are all making Leanore look like a danged schoolgirl. Well, here is what may happen if you visit The Lightning Pool in Nowhere, Arizona…This is from Book two Gateway to the Sun. He blinked at her words and felt an alarm go off in his head. He sat back onto his heels. “Now, Sophie, you had a trauma and—”“No!” she shouted as she sat up and unbuttoned his jeans. She reached in and grabbed his hard cock. “Mmm,” she moaned.Immediately, he stiffened as her soft fingers grasped him. She stroked him with rapid… Read more »
It's never Friday Flames unless Naughty Leanore stops by. If everyone likes this scene from her book "Gateway To The Sun", you'll like her other 29 books she has out.
As always, thanks for stopping by!
*blasting the air conditioning now*
Hot, hot, hot!!! Now, where's my husband?! GREAT excerpts ladies!
Hehehe – was he standing right behind you?
Angel of Death Book 1 Demonic pulled away from her for a moment to look into her cat eyes, the silent question hung between them. Now was the time to pull back or it would be too late. She answered his question by opening her blouse to him. Her nipples were hard from desire. His mouth came back down to claim hers in a furious kiss and his hands cupped her breasts toying with them making them ache with need. Mika’s hands traveled over his chest and down his back in a way that goose bumps covered his flesh. He… Read more »
Love your characters names. Great excerpt, too. I hope you'll keep sharing every Flaming Friday! Thank you!
Loved all the excerpts!
Lea Ellen {night owl in IL}
Hi Lea Ellen!! Thanks for stopping by.
All of these were truly smokin', another great week at the Flames, Sheri. Nice one, Leigh Savage!
SNOW WHITE AND HER SEVEN LOVERS by Jenna Ives. Available at amazon & bn.com: Today was Saturday. That meant sex with Doc tonight. Not only was he a real doctor, but his favorite sexual fantasy was to “play doctor” with me. And frankly, my favorite activity was to spend the whole week thinking up ailments that he could, um, treat me for. Yes, Saturday was my favorite day of the week. Not that I’d admit it to my six other lovers. I was very satisfied with — and by — each of them, in their own special ways. But Doc… Read more »