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Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth. Desire beyond reason…or rationale.

It’s not easy to write a
scene that captures your reader’s imagination and attention. To hold
them in a grip so tight…they go up in flames.

Today, I want you to share your
Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader…up in flames.
doesn’t have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our
blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.

start it off, here’s a snippet from my upcoming

Portals of Oz
“Jack,” she moaned.
“Say my name again.” Pleasure like no
other washed over at the sound of his name on her lips. His hand brushed her
heated core, and he hummed his appreciation. “You don’t wear underwear?” A
wolfish grin pulled his lips. “You’re so smooth and wet.”

“I’ve never liked … they’re … I don’t
grow hair ….” She couldn’t form a complete sentence as he flicked his teasing

“You don’t like panties, and you don’t
have hair here?” he helpfully supplied for her. He slid lower down her body,
taking a pert nipple into his mouth, drawing on it deeply. The taste of orange
blossom honey burst in his mouth, and he groaned the delicious taste of her.

He swirled his finger around her little
nub without direct contact. Her hips searched to increase her pleasure,
writhing and moaning her need. The succulence seeping from her body was laden
with pheromones and musk. Jack inhaled the heat of her. It tempered his cock
into steel, and made his head spin.

Excited, hot, her body readied itself
for him.
people! I showed you mine – now it’s your turn to show me yours. Don’t forget to leave
your book title so interested parties can rush  out and buy a copy  🙂
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