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Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth. Desire beyond reason...or rationale.
It's not easy to write a scene that captures your reader's imagination and attention. To hold them in a grip so tight...they go up in flames.
Today, I want you to share your Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader...up in flames.
It doesn't have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.
To start it off, here's a snippet from my upcoming release.
She wet her lips and moved a step nearer. "We'd have to work closely together. You cool with that?"
Unveiled hunger smoldered in his eyes. She took a chance. Patience did something so far out of character that she even surprised herself. Lifting to her tiptoes, she turned her face up to his.
Heat sizzled from his arms and soaked into her body. His hot look of surprise was followed by an even hotter response. The moment he lowered his head and took her lips, broiler fans set on high blew over her.
With a subtle shift of his legs and wicked ass, he burrowed her tighter against him. Apparently, it wasn't close enough, because his hand slid over her hip and pulled her closer into him. His palm continued to move lower, shaping a butt cheek through the thin t-shirt she wore.
Dampness saturated her bikini panties—she shivered, realizing how unconcealed that sign of arousal was.
Rhycious chuckled in a low tone, rubbing his hardened pelvis against her. "As far as working together, I'd say we're off to a great start." He let her feel his cock in its engorged splendor, and moved with sensuous play against her mound.
His teeth nibbled and soft lips worked their magic down the side of her neck. She dropped her head back to give him further entrée. "We'll be totally teamed up. I'm game if you are."
"Should we practice our joint effort, polytima, and see how good we can be together?"
How much hotter could they possibly get? Much as she hated flames, her body burned hot enough to internally combust.
Okay people! I showed you mine - now it's your turn to show me yours. Don't forget to leave your book title so interested parties can rush out and buy a copy :)